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Sunday, August 25, 2019

Redacted Revisionist Obituary


My last blog, revisionist obituaries, was inspired by something I read about a former colleague. It described his wife as the love of his life and him as a devoted father and grandfather. Definitely not the man I remember, and I wrote: “Talk about a revisionist obituary.” I then proceeded to write my own, well in advance, I hope. The post received many comments, quite a few of which seemed to think my essay was an accurate description of me. In the spirit of full disclosure, here is the redacted version of my revisionist obituary.

Throughout her life, as she clawed her way up the corporate ladder in a male-dominated profession, Elaine was anything but easy-going and non-confrontational. She was often described as having brass ones. She was known for her quick wit and sense of humor, which frequently sank into the gutter. Her lengthy work hours and long commute gave her an excuse for not keeping a tidy home, though she did clean twice a year or whenever she was expecting company.

She didn’t even try to follow in her mother’s footsteps as an outstanding baker. As for her cooking—she had a handful of meals that were generally edible. But she did a great job with her mother’s recipe for Italian meatballs and pasta sauce.

Elaine had an on and off relationship with exercise and had a similar relationship with being trim and fit. She would probably have needed to wear Omar-the-tentmaker muumuus were it not for her good genes, growing up with lots of outdoor activities, and a short but intense few years as a fencer during high school. The ship of her seven-minute mile sailed when she was in her forties, and she huffed and puffed her way through a twenty-minute mile from her sixties onward.

Her skill level in the distaff arts was indeed unsurpassed. Sewing, knitting, crocheting. You name it, she did it well. It is true that she won first prize in Colgate Palmolive’s Holiday Doll Pageant thirteen years in a row for outfits she designed and made for dolls going to disadvantaged children. In her later years, however, she failed miserably in learning to use a glue gun. Her crafts were full of those telltale spider-web strings, a sure giveaway that she didn’t let go of the trigger quickly enough.

Her community service was hit or miss, since she never had much patience for politics, but she was a dedicated supporter of animal rescue groups. A refrigerator magnet reading “Patron Saint of Senior Cats” would be a nice token of remembrance, if anyone wants to get one made.

Elaine had several long-term relationships in her life. In her later years, she learned that a few (not the ‘many’ of her revisionist obituary) men secretly thought of her as the love of their life. Women called her a true and faithful friend. All would tell you (with a straight face) that they never exchanged a mean word or had a single heated argument in all their years together. Then they’d laugh until tears rolled down their cheeks.

Though she never had any children of her own, Elaine was beloved by her nieces and nephew and grandnieces and grandnephew. “Aunt E” could always be counted on to make everyone laugh. Their memories of good times with her, along with the hundreds of books and essays she published, will guarantee that she will not be forgotten any time soon.

Actually, I think this last paragraph was fine as written. At least I hope so.

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